2017. 9月23号/24号 独立写作解析
2017-10-07 17:39来源:@Ada哈哈捏作者:特兰克斯

9.23和9.24号的独立写作题目有个共同点:长!同学们碰到这种长题目,憋慌张,淡定地找出关键词,弄清楚你选定的立场需要论述的是什么。平时的刷题训练更是要注意提高审题的准确度。下面具体来看一下题目吧。

9.23

Different colleges use different ways to help freshmen students adapt to campus life, which one of the following do you think is the most  beneficial option for first-year students?

1. attending a one-week orientation or introduction program when you are in the university campus, and it will begin before you have the classes.

2. Meeting regularly at your first year with a student in your major field who has entered the university for several years.

解析:

题目中的关键词给大家标了红色。这个题目需要在两个选择中去选一个能带给freshmen更多好处的。同学们既可以在选定一个position后,去说这个选择有哪两点或三点好处。也可以在选定一个position后,一段说选定的这个有多好,另一段说没有选择的那个是多么的不够好。

Position: I think first-year students will benefit more from regular conversation with senior students in the same major field.

P1: Though orientation or introduction program usually provides basic information for college freshmen and lays a foundation for campus life, this kind of introductory information is just the tip of the iceberg and often too general.

P2: Unlike orientation program, one-to-one communication with upperclassmen from related major helps first-year students gain a comprehensive understanding of college life like club activities, academic study and career planning. Besides, personal experience is usually vivid and detailed.


下面再看看9.24号的作文题。

The school has decided to give a group pf teenagers( aged 16-17) a two-month summer break, on the condition that they must fulfil one of the following tasks, which one do you think is better?

1. having university-level courses to help them decide their future major.

2. travelling to museums of art and history and then write down their feelings.

解析:

题目中的关键词也给大家标了红色。这些关键词都是在思考论据和立场时候需要考虑的具体语境。这个题目中第二个选项,可以同之前给大家补充过的“museums" / “ learning art"/ "learning history" 的相关素材联系起来。只是要注意结合 "teenagers( aged 16-17)" 这个群体的特点和 “summer break" 这个时间段去谈。

Position: It is better for teenagers to visit museums during the summer break.

P1: Since the main task for teenagers from 16-17 years of age is to get preparation for college entrance examination, they should focus on high school curriculum learning which can lay a solid foundation for future study in the university.

P2: Visiting museums of art and history not only broadens students' horizons, but also facilitates school learning.

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